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 # Show version
 
-You need to update the hosts file : replace the "veos" host
-with one to which you can log on with ssh.
+You need to update the hosts file : replace the "veos" host with one to which you can connect with ssh.
 
 Run ``ansible-playbook -i hosts show_version.yaml``.
 
 # Show the full responses to a module invocation
 
-This will show all of the responses, including
-the bits that most people don't even exist.
+This will show __all__ of the responses, including the bits that most people don't even know exist.
 
 Run ``ansible-playbook -i hosts show_all_responses.yaml``